All Comments on 'An American Houseguest Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Magnifique!

Your story is brilliantly told and very erotic. Keep it up!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
awesome

"What a Polonius..." Not something you find in most smut. Right on!

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 11 years ago
I'm enjoying the characters...a lot!

I'm vicariously visiting an unknown world.

It's especially fun when the variety of females appear.

Speculating on who's next! :+))

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. A few pointers as I hae lived in the Confederation Helvetique

1. Lufthansa flights. LH does not fly to ZCH from JFK; flight could go vi FRA amd a connecting flight ro ACH or they could hve flown by Swiss International.

3. French Switzerland or on divide between French and German Switzerland.They see, to be in French Switzerland, "la Suisse Romande" just say so in any story revision.

4. Lake size. Lake is a bit large for a haldfhour ride. Unless near Interlaken d goign length of a long narrow lake

5. No counts, but aristocracy. There are no counts in Switzerland; there is an aristocracy, but no landed gentry. A "confederation" of cantons since 1291. La Suisse Romnde is mainly protestant, in fact, Calvinist, is very entrepreneurial. The banks of Geneva, Lausanne and Neuchâtel and watchmaking, precision tools and chocolate, yes chocolate (for example, Suchard, are the real aristocracy,

Je vous souhaite beaucoup de succes!

6. Swiss women. I can say the women of la Ssse Romande are gorgeous. . The ones I knew loved sexy mesh bras, thigh highs and lace panties. Much more casual nudity in nthe cantons or counties of French Switzerland. Saturday morning sunbathing in the garden, wearing panties, drinking café au lait=and nibbling on a brioche and reading the "La Tribune de Genève Women's nipples were usually brown for rubnesttes and large for the size of their boobs.

Overall, despite details. your story is très formidable. Merci

Iam ooking forward to the rest of the stories!!

petitmortpetitmortover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the detailed info! Most appreciated!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

well done...

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