All Comments on 'An Anal Slut is Born Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Nice

Great idea! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
A good concept

I really like the idea and the direction of the story. It would benefit a great deal from some editing of grammar. It's not bad, just needs a little polish.

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