All Comments on 'An Angel - A Devil Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

thank you excellent read write more

HeadguyHeadguyalmost 13 years ago
More, please

A most intiguing start (not to mention a terrific sex scene that first night). Perhaps it was meant to reflect the state of the narrator, but the oral sex at the breakfast table was nowhere near as erotically charged/exciting as the descriptions of the sex that preceded it. If that was indeed intentional, I am even more curious to see where this story is headed.

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