by Darnuses
The right amount of background info/build-up goes a long way.
Not sure of your intent, but if looking for encouragement to proceed, please do.
It all works, characters storyline, hot steamy raunchy sex.
Well written and ticks all the boxes!
Great build up, amazing development, solid characters, and perfectly fluid in such a short story.
The details and cuteness and sexiness were perfect.
This is going to be one of my top stories.
Thanks.