by oral454younger
This outstanding romance story really should have been a multi-chapter story. In the richness of the plot are many lost opportunities to expand the story and get into greater depth in all areas. As it stands, this story nevertheless has appealing characters, a good build up, and an excellent plot coupled with beautifully written love scenes that are in exactly the right proportion to that plot. The brevity of this story is the only thing disappointing about it.
tell me about stereotypes, will you? But then again it made me chuckle most of the time. So, well done I suppose. ;)
when john did what he did i was confused but in lite of the end i understand and think that should happen mote often to those like matt