All Comments on 'An Anonymous Relationship'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice

enjoyable short story. would love a follow up.

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
good

There is much room for another chapter. It is a good story and would like to see more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Pleeeaaase

Please continue this story. Absolutly fantastic. I wanna know what happens next!

BittysweetBittysweetover 8 years ago
keep it going

I'm so intrigued to know what comes next

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More more

Good story, mostly good grammar, n a good tease. I may have to try this w my dad!!

Pls add more!

OneSilky

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice

What a great story of how a loving daughter should treat her daddy. I look forward to part two where this loving daughter starts servicing her father on a regular basis. I hope they hookup at the porn shop a few times a week with daddy blowing his seed into his loving daughters womb two a three times a week and his daughter is not on birth control. When daddy finds out and is in shock that the tight new pussy belongs to his little girl she can then show him her baby bump and drop to her knees and suck his manhood like a good little girl. Eventually they will stop going to the porn shop and can instead christen the home with incest sex. By the time mommy knows what is happening she will be a grandma, imagine her shock when she wakes at night to strange moans and grunts and no husband in the bed. She walks past her grand children's nursery and when she opens her 21 year old daughters bedroom door there's her husband and daughter. Daddy has his 7 month old daughter bent over the bed doggystyle hammering her from behind while his daughter moans in orgasm and begs daddy to fill her pussy. After getting caught dad will mount their daughter with ever increasing frequency such that when dad is not working he resides in his daughters bed.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 8 years ago
yezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:

excellent details everything awesome details everything

spectacular details everything --- --- overall phenomenal .....................

1. : if father hasn't figured out that it's daughter just yet don't do

that yet keep going her leading him on doing stuff doing everything

remaining anonymous ..... 2. : what's happened about Stacy she's been

completely dropped after the beginning story sooooooooooooooo

possibly Heather tells Stacy about everything except fact

Heather's father as long as Stacy can keep mouth shut ... after this

Stacy now begins talking same man ooooopppppsssss you've never

really answered whom Stacy did cybersex the beginning the story

if it's not him Stacy now begins talking same man also doing

everything w/him possibly Heather sets things so she can watch

w/o them really knowing possibly even complete3some happening

some point ooooopppppsssss Heather only noticed her father's truck

outside building along w/him walking outside the building

so possibly not him inside boothe next her inside boothe inside building

soooooooooooooooo some point after her curiousness gets best her

she gives her father while they're tender moment the safewords

< i'll ask if you've got your daughter's panties . if you slide pair

pair panties through hole . i'll suck i'll fuck daddy cock > watch what

he does after this listen what he says after this

jacobmerriweatherjacobmerriweatherover 8 years ago
Brilliant

What a great story! Hurry it up with the part two, definitely looking forward to her figuring out a way to confront her dad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Excellent

Smoking hot! Great story would really like to see this have at least a couple of chapters..

mr_edriftermr_edrifterover 8 years ago
Short but hot

A great short work that is hot from start to finish and has amazing sequel potential. I hope to read more by you soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
please carry on the series

Brilliant story great plot but please carry on the story you have written a great daddy daughter story

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh my god

That was hilarious. Lol

sexypoobearsexypoobearover 8 years ago

Write more please love it so far

QuickSilver0415QuickSilver0415over 8 years ago
I started reading as soon as posted

But I never commented because I didn't have a profile. Just wanna say that I LOOPVE the way this story is going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Yeah Right

This is very realistic. She lives in a Midwestern CITY, she goes to a community college, but she can't find any men her own are to screw! Okay. And frankly, literotica amazes me. In their efforts to be "socially relevant", they wouldn't dare allow a character under eighteen to appear in any of their stories. Yet they publish countless tales of rape, pillage, and a never ending supply of INCEST stories, ninety-percent of which are written by pervy white guys, who probably haven't been laid in real life since 1982! At least at other sites they don't pretend they're trying to bring legitimacy to freakin SMUT! As for your story... I'll give you an "E" for effort, but you FAIL at anything approaching realism!

secondsamuelsecondsamuelover 7 years ago
So....

Porn should be realistic? Also... just because she can find guys to fuck, doesn't mean she necessarily wants them. I thought it was a great story, with a good build up and revelation. Can't wait for the next.

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxover 6 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm:

it's been sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo damn long literally reading

this story this franchise none clue how long it's been ..... i've just got done

finally reading this again i'm gonna read least some part2 ..... THIS STORY

STILL ONE OF MY MOST FAVORITE STORIES THAT's EVER HAPPENED

THIS SITE .................... i'll honestly say that I'M NOT REALLY SURE IF I'VE

EVER DID READ EVERYTHING

mary1492mary1492about 4 years ago
my first

the first time i suck my daddy cock was not at a glory hole it was in my bed Rome he beat me and maid me suck his cock now i just let him do what ever he false like doing to me

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