by SaddleRider
Never claimed otherwise. I edit my own work and things slip. I write for myself, not looking to be published, don't feel the need to hand it off to another for editing, and share it because others have come to enjoy them in spite of their imperfections.
I'm sorry if the errors dent the story for you, but thanks for reading anyway.
As good as your story is, SaddleRider, you have problems with the character's names. A glaring example is in this chapter, "Pel turned abruptly at the sharpness of the tone to find Pel standing there nude." Bryanna, Brynn, or Brynna, is another problem, along with the male mage.