by fuzzyb2
I enjoy the twist of the kid's family dynamic as it sounds like what I dealt with growing up, so the reality is there and you kept things rolling along very well to keep the reader engaged. Gotta love Aunts, especially the free spirited variety!
I look forward to the next part of your tail of you and your aunt
Six nice comments,and a couple from people complaining,about the spelling,ect. in the story...If "you the critics" do not like a good hot sex story,go to the fucking library,and check out some boring classic bullshit..."WAKE UP PEOPLE",these are 'FUCK STORIES" not classI lit.will bet,that when you people watch a fuck movie,you bitch,about the writing,the lighting,ect...Get a life either enjoy the fuck stories,and fuck movies,or "BLOW YOUR FUCKING BRAINS OUT." rip
Look at the writings of this tool. This idiot can't even mash a decent rant (comment) together. What an illiterate tool.
What's with the nastiness? So a guy doesn't like a story, offers tips (not that good actually) and another critiques. Who cares if the feedback is literary or not. These ARE fuck stories -- stroke your hearts out and don't sweat the little things, IMO.
Every one would love to have a aunt like that, I enjoyed a Mother-in-law like that when I was married to my first wife, I wonder why she's a ex now?
Ah the naughty auntie, what a convenient opportunity to be 'dropped' in his lap! A great start to what promises to be a well thought out and written story. I look forward to reading the next chapter. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.