All Comments on 'An Early Return'

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tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
USUALLY MEANS BAD RESULTS

however all in the family overcums and leaves no room for early withdrawal. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
thank you

for a great story about love and fidelity.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good Stuff

It's good to have some faithful wives thrown into this category sometimes. But why do so many otherwise good writers confuse loose and lose so often.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Sweet and loving

Now he needs to get her comfortable masturbating in front of him and then go down on her after she cums the first time. She'd be so hot and wet and, he could lick all of her sweet pussy juice out of her.

Thanks for the great read

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Editing

Needs editing as there are numerous errors in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
tedious

and poorly written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
There Were So Many Different Ways This Story Could Have Gone

And it was alluded to often. The pool boy and/or gardener showed up off schedule. She was observed by her neighbor and a couple of his guests. Sorry, but I have to agree, this was poorly written. Lacking in entertainment value. Better luck next time.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Not bad

Pretty good story. Just glad Raul didn't get lucky.

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