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Anonymousover 14 years agoLoved it!
Wonderful story, brought back memories of hot teachers. Maybe next time mom and the teacher could......
Anonymousover 14 years agoContinue but...
This was a good story but a little hurried. Slow down and take your time with the events. Also, get an editor, even a spell checker would be a help.
oldwayneover 14 years agoWalkingeagle has it right again.
I thought it was a fine tale. It even had a ring of truth. Keep 'em coming!
gotraneover 13 years agoGreat Start, But...
Great start, but please do some proofreading. I get your meaning, but check your spelling. It adds more quality to your work. Keep writing, either way.
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