by arachnophile52
She should have looked at the license plate ane gone to the police station first and then gone to thr Anson residence. Yes. She was a cruel brat. Not unlike many teenage girla. But being an ally raped to compensate? For two weeks? It's past extreme. I think she should have turned the guys in.
She went to the Police. And saw to it that all her tormentors were imprisoned for years and years. She went after their families and destroyed them. Your ending didn't fit the personality you gave her and to suggest she made some type of transformation while being tortured was ridiculous. Nothing that happened would suggest any type of "stockholm syndrome" effect. Lacking effective writing and filled with unlikeable characters, this simply wasn't fun or entertaining to read.
Long sections read like the manifesto of a teenage MRA, a genre of writing which I confess I can't wank to. You could just delete them to improve this enormously. Otherwise readers might think they're your views, celestial friend forbid!
Wait for porn stories to take a stab at religion huh?
Pathetic