All Comments on 'An Effective Training Program'

I very much liked your presentation and story delivery.

Great story, excellent plot line.

But... much of the story was a wee bit too predictable. You got many of the complications correct about Dave and Tanya's illicit affair, but he never really struggled with cuckolding Peter. Yes, you slightly mentioned it, but it seemed like a case of 'when the cat's away, the mice will play'. Meh, that's an ignorable complaint on my part.

Dave, Alina, and Miro... that was a convenient way of ending their marriage.

The sex was scintillating and hot. Most women of the world could probably relate to Tanya and Alina's experience with men.

I should probably expand on a few story ideas I just got... thanks for the inspiration!