All Comments on 'An Elegant Seduction Pt. 02'

Very good, very well written. A pleasure to read!

This story has grown on me during the reading of the first two parts. I think there is a lot of options the author can use to develop this plot as it moves forward. The characterization is strong and Lynne is a realistic person to identify with and we know much more about her right now than we do with many characters on Literotica at the end of the story. This makes it much easier for the reader to engage with character and enjoy the story, but then they feel as if the know how she will react in certain situations. If she comes across as inconsistent and confused (unless she is supposed to be by the situation) then the readers will lose connection to the story thread. Very good work so far. Thanks for posting this enjoyable and interesting tale. 5* so far.

Keenly awaiting next instalment.

Thx

Fantastic buildup. I can guess as to where it's going, but only broadly and the anticipation is killing me.

Those looking for a quick finish are going to QQ but this is shaking up looking like the sort of work I come to lit, hoping against hope, to find.

I'm really liking this series. I like the slow build up. Ok, I'm on to chapter three. I'm excited to see what happens.

I'm really loving this. I like that you're filing in the characters, so many write them so shallowly. You make them really come alive and draw the reader in, wanting to know them better. Petra is very interesting, with hints of things to come. While young, she gives you a sense of someone older and knows what she wants, even if she isn't willing to tell you yet. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

really enjoying this series beautifully written, substitute horses for boards and this could be me lol.

The teacher is often the student.

So far I have learned that I have a lot to learn

Another 5 star and shure the next follow ups are jumping the same category