All Comments on 'An Endless Dream'

Your story rocked. I have read everything you have submitted so far, and it has all been great. This was no different as far as intensity or quality. Keep up the great work!

Wow, I love those kind of stories even if I'm not a guy or gay...but damn, I like your style of writting. Keep up the great work.

Wow! That was so erotic and beautiful that I am almost speechless. I have to read the rest of your submissions now. Keep up the good work! I'm not a guy or gay but I still found that to be the most erotic and touching story I have ever read. You are amazing!

That had to be one of the best stories that I have ever read.

This would make a great movie. Keep up the great stories. I intend to read all the stories that you write.

I could not rate this one a 5. You are very careless in your use of language, and it detracts from the story. Wonton is a chinese dumpling, wanton is sexually abandoned and wild. Just one example. Get someone with a better command of the language to review what you write, maybe one of the volunteer editors for Lit. Your talent and amazing imagination should not be lost in poor and incorrect word choice.

Yet again, you have written another great story, hun!

Good Story. I'm straight, but I certainly appreciate your writing style!

I read that someone did not give you a 5. That is not right because you took the english language and manipulated it into your own style. Your style is able to hook the reader and actually become one with a character. I wish I could give you a 10!

I think this story is as amazing as Tristian and Sam's stories. You are an amazing writer beautifully written and I have come to realize i want my relationship with my boyfriend ( I am a female) to be like the one's your write about. I was so turned on. Thanks

i loved your story, the way you weaved together this story of quiet seduction, drawing your readers in with detailed, erotic language that helped draw out the story, while making it something you still want to follow.

however, sometimes your choice of words in certain situations- such as in the middle of an intense paragraph- had me as a reader stop and question the choice of word, effectively breaking the erotic flow you had that made your story so enticing.

but despite this and the cheesiness of the name dream for the sex god (hahaha), it was an amazing story.

i love it. second part please?

Like all of your grea work before, this was not the exception.

That was amazing. I love all your stories so there is no way I can pick my favorite. Can't wait to read more.

i have read quite a few of your story's now and i have aslo recomended your work to a friend of mine which i rarely do. your writing style is very good, thankyou for trying so hard to make high quality stories. please keep up the dedication and keep aiming to improve.

sadly i am not yet adept enough with short stories to give you truley helpful constructive feedback on your writing. i can mearly say that it is a joy to read your work; thank you.

from Rhiannon.

That was awesome!!!

I would love it if you did an epilogue or continued the story. That would be great

best sex scene evarrrrrrr!!!oh my god he called him dream i liked how i was unsure of what he was till the very end lol i loved it it was great.nix

Love this story ,as well as your others.

Oh.

My.

God.

Well, okay, I do admit, when I guessed that he was some sort of incubus I expected the rest of the story to be full of lust, lust, lust, lust, and sex.

Oh my god I was wrong...

I loved it. I like how Dream is kind of new to everything. He, I'm assuming, hasn't had not-in-a-dream sex in a long time, and especially never with anyone he loved before.

I realize this comment is late, considering this story was posted like, 2004 (wait, did I read the date right? it's in the Month/Day/Year format right?), but whatever. Just wanted to comment.

I Loved the story, i dream to find a man like that, sweet, loving, caring, i fell i love with this story, i hope you write a sequel :)