All Comments on 'An Erogenous Enigma'

keep going this time put the sister in the story

great story. sister would be great to do next. keep up the good job!

the dialogue was a little corny but the story was hot!

the trigger for instigating the desirable reading situation was a fresh welcome as i've not seen anybody else use music quite to this manner. it could have been a little more in depth with continuing on the story and seeing the after effects of the parent and offspring once the music had stopped playing. we can only assume that there would be quite some regret like when the two boys were listening to the tape together. on other words, i would not mind to see a continuing story at this point.

By this point, after so many years - I assume there will be no sequel. That's too bad Interesting story. Would be fun to see where it would have lead