All Comments on 'An Erotic Island Getaway'

What a lovely fantasy. Two couples who had never met, come together to share an exotic sexual interlude. I liked the intimate descriptions. Though it was written from a seldom used 2nd person POV, and pure fantasy; I loved it.

Maggie

Soooooooo good, Love it baby, keep them coming.

Very interesting storyline and pov. Great descriptive language.

Good job, B. I was thrown off by the use of 2nd person (and of "wee wee," but that's my problem), but I think it was an interesting concept. Congrats!

Very nice little story. Very few typos and good construction. Nice slow buildup to the "money shot", although maybe a bit overlong on the "messy panty" descriptions. The descriptions were a bit off-putting, although I imagine panty fetish folks will be delighted. I like a nice sniff, myself, but on the way to the "real stuff." I think your story had good progression and moved naturally into the double fuck scene. Fairly tame, but I see you have left the door open for further play.

Nice job.

liked this story B...it was well written, thought out and very detailed...yeah, the weewee kinda of thru me for a lil but i got to thinking...weewee or piss or urine...hell...weewee works just fine*smile*...Thank you for allowing us to read you and for also the time you give to your fans...it makes feel good that our authors we read night after night remember us and care enough to include us in on the triumps,losses and all around life. as always respectfully fan in Texas naynay

He he he, I LOVED it!! considering that this story is about me, exactly as how I would have fantasised about it... Thumbs up for you my good friend.... keep it up!!!

Great Job and had me as hot as I've ever been... Keep 'em cumming... You get better with every story you write!