All Comments on 'An Evening at Club Couple-Up'

Wonderful beginning! The scene resonated with me. Lokking forward to the continuation.

Also today a new baboon............

Good LW story and great effort to write it

hope there will be more to this story

A very well written tale with an unusual twist.

Well worth the 5 stars I've given it.

Very nicely done and keeping the reader in suspense who the mystrey man at the bar was. Looking for more stories from you.

Nice balance of mood, character, and hot eroticism. Keep it up!

I welcome and appreciate useful feedback. If you didn't like the story, please let me know how I can improve it. If you did like the story, please let me know how I can improve it. :)

Sex with a stranger, to entertain some male in her life (not a man). Guess she should be grateful the male using her doesn't have a rape fetish. The sex was graphic, animalistic, and crude, so I suspect it was perfect for fans of this genre. Just hard to get past the truth that this story appears to celebrate the disrespect and degradation of a woman by a male who she thinks has legitimate feelings for her.

But I'm trying to make a philosophical observation about a cartoon sketch. Probably a well done sketch, but still, a very ugly cartoon. Congratulations, if that was your goal.

Or does hubby get to fuck other women too while wifey watches?

I read your other story first and underrated it. Don't particularly like the subject matter of either, but you do have some talent.

Hot and well written it certainly got me going