All Comments on 'An Evening On the Beach'

by bicurmifemfantasy

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NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
Spell check

I'm tired of reading stories that even the dumbest 13 year old would catch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Nice story but

Nice story but the grammatical errors are distracting.

alyna_808_9alyna_808_9over 14 years ago
good

man... you need some spelling checks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LOVING ON BEACH

I LOVED YOUR STORY !!! MAYBE SOME WATER SEX ,BATH OR JACUZZI SEX!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
LOVING ON BEACH

I LOVED YOUR STORY !!! MAYBE SOME WATER SEX ,BATH OR JACUZZI SEX!!!!!!

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