All Comments on 'An Everlasting Affair'

As usual from this author.

There is a strange lilt to this tale. I hear it almost more than read it. Good fiction good tension good turn of the character. Just enough sex to keep it interesting. It seems so real. Is it?

I'd prefer FIL spelled out. I'd prefer to not see naked question marks. But I love your nicknames and how the story progresses. Good work.

Woody Johnson

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This is similar to how I started an affair with my brother.

My husband all but disowned me after the birth of our daughter. I didn't want to cheat on him, and although it is socially taboo, incest is the perfect solution to wanting to be "faithful."

Good story line. Stroke value. Pl write more. With more passion

Please try to get a better understanding of the English language and have someone else to proofread for you. This will make your stories easier to read and accepted on a higher level.

Very well written story. Good characterization. Narration is very gripping. One is curious to know what happen when suddenly narrator's husband arrives. Suspense element in story is very well built up. I would say it is love story! Please keep writing. I shall be waiting for this writer's next story.

I think I can identify myself in this Indian story. I went through same agonies. My husband neglected me as he was career-minded.It was my brother-in-law (my husband's elder brother)who took my care. Very quickly we were in to bed making love. Though he is elder to me by twenty years, he is very youthful in bed. I like this story very much. Only suggestion is: please give detailed description of sexual acts.

wonderful story, I liked it very much, Thank you