by ausfet
Just about perfect. Well thought out, 3 dimensional characters and nicely paced
What a great character. You really crawled into Rhys' head. Phenomenal. I love damaged characters who manage to plod through the dismal and cruel realities of their existences to find and carve out a small slice of their own happiness.
Thank you. Your stories are populated with such interesting people.
Nice little romance. Gave you 3*s.
Just one thing. Kept thinking about Sofia.
Poor thing, startled her man and gets her face rearranged. It is her fault 😣,and then he dumps her😢😭.Ouch!!!
Thanks for the good story.
AMerryman
P.S. These commentors sure know how to stroke you good, lol!😆😆
Have read several of your stories now and love the characters you create.
There are very few people who can crawl inside the mind and soul of a person of the opposite gender and tell his/her story convincingly. You’re one of those few.
I am a regular reader of Literotica stories, may be for at least twenty years and I know there are some gems lying around, this one is one of this type. The last time I had rated it, so this time I could not. Please tell us another story.
Not many writers can so convincingly tell a story from the POV of the opposite sex as Ausfet. It's more than a slice off life, it's a slice of humanity with a life lesson attached. Rare, indeed. Please write more.