All Comments on 'An Extended Invitation Vol. 01'

Found spelling error in first paragraph. Stopped reading at that point.

Why comment about spelling, as I recall you warned us you don't have an editor. The story read very well and was interesting, which is all one can ask of an author. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Isn't this just a standard cuckold story? Is there a plot? I think this has been done, like a few thousand times. What makes yours any different?

When should I expect your next installment? I enjoyed this tremendously

ITs so hard to find fresh takes on the cuckold theme. I like the way you address the reader within the story-it made me perk up and pay attention. Great idea to come at the story from the point of view of the other man. But more than that, the narrator is confident and a bit arrogant, but realistically so, he seems to be a well-rounded human being-this is very rare in the cuckold genre, where the other man is usually a one-dimensional "bull". As for the serial-cliffhanger format-I don't think you should care whether some people find it frustrating. People who like cuckold stories should expect their pleasure to be withheld, right? Please keep going.

Will you be extending this one out?