All Comments on 'An Honourable Slut'

So sweet!

The tale's cadence and flow grabbed me first, like a rivers current. Good writing oughta have this exact effect on readers. It ought to carry them along without smashing them onto the rocks or into the shallows (you wanna thrill them not kill them). Reminds me of Rudyard Kipling.

Love me tender, love me sweet

Never let me go

You have made my life complete

And I love you so

Love me tender, love me true

All my dreams fulfill

For my darlin', I love you

And I always will

Love me tender, love me long

Take me to your heart

For it's there that I belong

And we'll never part

Love me tender, love me true

All my dreams fulfill

For my darlin', I love you

And I always will

Love me tender, love me dear

Tell me you are mine

I'll be yours through all the years

Till the end of time

Love me tender, love me true

All my dreams fulfill

For my darlin', I love you

And I always will

So... A mixture of features that in this world are partly from the 18th-19th century, partly from the 21st century.