by tantrik721
Once again in love with ur writing der are few English literature professors who read your stories and correcting you for silly spelling mistakes pls ignore them and keep writing will wait for further update hope its not gonna be a long wait...
You are one of the finest erotica writer here..love your heroines, they are sexy as fuck & hot as hell.. eagerly awaiting further installments..keep them rolling & ignore the negatives..
OHH IT WAS TOO MUCH. AFTER READING IT I HAD TO MANUALLY FINGER MY WET VAGINA AS I WAS ALONE THEN AND COULD NOT WAIT FOR HUBBY TO RETURN FROM TOUR.----WANT SOME MORE EPISODES PLEASE------RINAKRISHNA33@YAHOO.COM
Loved it a lot as you brought back Malti. Wish you all the best and sincerely wish you would give us a long long story with Malti and her sexploits.
A wee bit disappointed that Malti didn't wear a saree at the party !Please make her wear a lowest possible saree one day with her supple white belly and deep navel showing a whole lot,along with a skimpy blouse
She can either seduce Manoj with the attire or have a threesome with langa's friend.
What a outstanding story.In your story you described women body so great.Payal, Kavita,Neha & Malti
Why you making it like indian serials.. Please continue writing or stop writing..Rather than making us wait forever
तिच्या नवऱ्याला हे कळले होते की बाथरूमात त्याचा बाॅस तिचा उपभोग घेतो आहे व त्याला तेच अपेक्षित होते.
मग मूर्खा रात्री तिला झवण्यापूर्वी योनी साॅरी झवलेली चूत प्रथम चाटायची व मग झवायचे.
Next time make story with licking episodes.
It completes the cuck situation in depth.
Add more such stories. You are writing well.
Some lady said it wetted her cunt. And made me hard.
please post the next part as soon as possible. Where is your next part? plz post it
Please write more of this. Don’t open it up between wife n hubby quickly. Like wife fuck around thinking her husband doesn’t know anything of her affairs
Its a great story and i love how malti ends up in such a horny state. next time let manoj fuck her too and langa again but pls dress her up in saree , anklet and heels . its a request
Please continue the story with a 3rd part,where malti would be fucked by manoj
You are the best writer... keep writing...we all are waiting since ages....big fan
Amazing writing please write another malti story. We want the third event. Its so perfect
Very hot story n narration. Please continue with next episodes of Malti.
You are a mature seasoned writer.
It is not 'ink' but 'pearls ' flow from your Pen
Your stories , your narration.style of creating the situation,seamless flow are unique.
You take the reader at zenith of eroticism
CONGRATS , though very late in response
तुम कौन हो भाई? इतना अच्छा लिखते हो? बहुत ही स्वाभाविक कहानी, with subtle tensions building up to a great action of adultery. उसपर से स्त्री अपने तमाम व्यभिचार के बावजूद मासूम और प्यार किए जाने लायक ही लगती है। great. बधाई। .
It's been awhile since we read something new from you. Where are you? Hope you are doing well