All Comments on 'An Indian Exhibitionist Wife'

welcome back buddy, waited so long for u, u r my favourite Indian erotica writer, hope u will continue..a

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I'm not sure there is a real marriage left in India after reading on this site.

Awesome writing. Don't pay any attention to these creeps here who bad-mouth great authors like you. These shitholes read the entire story and say rubbish thereafter. You have an extraordinary flair for writing superb erotica. The build up and overall story is outstanding,rated 5 stars. You are one of the best on Indian erotica on Literotica, right at par with Aurelius and bddrew86. Loved your writing and loved it before this story too.

Awaiting next round from your end.

PS - Would have been a wee bit happy if there was little more description of Malti in Indian attires like saree,like how skimpy was her blouse when she went to the shop ? Was she wearing it low on her hips with the navel peeking out,or the amount of jewellery she loves to wear,etc

Carry on the superlative work and DO NOT please pay attention to the retards here

I met a contract computer programmer from TaTa who was working in San Antonio, Texas. After we became good friends she fucked me every time we could be alone together. She was sexually insatiable, and willingly agreed to do anything I wanted, even very kinky fun. I was her exclusive lover and sex toy, and she gave herself to me completely in exchange for my sex and silence. She returned to India after one year, and I have not been fucked as hard or as well since she left. Great story!

If thats an awesome writing then are Trumps statements divine!!!

Keep writing!

This was a well written story. Don't stop!

This is a really good start and i would love to read Malti's future adventures. This should be a long story. Keep it up :)

Nice one

yes, make her get fucked by more people... and then get them murdered by Ravi... end your story with Ravi saying to Malti " aur kitno ko marvaogi (se marvoagi) " ... LOL

Such a erotic story with all detailed and slow buildup of desire and fulfillment. keep writing. (Y)

Please make maltis character more slutty, exhibitionist.

You sre a talented writer!

he must ramm her wherever he wats now...she becomes hubby slave

cant wait for part 2 and more...so erotic

Dude write the next part .....it's been a while...I am waiting for it please

Are you going to continue this story or it’s going to be incomplete like all the other one?

Post the next part already. Who do you take so long between the parts?

what next

This is no doubt one of the best erotic thriller i have read recently... Pls continue... Waiting for what happens next

illiterate cuck shit.

very erotic

the FRI reminds me of good times at outdoor sex more than a decade back

Please make the third part as soon as possible......

Best erotic thriller recently read

This is too good and I am big fan of your writing. Please can you update the third part soon

What an brilliant piece of writing..the description the build up... everything is soo perfect...I literally fapped 10 times reading this..hope you continue writing such unbelievably awesome stories...you are seriously a genius

👍👍

Wow wow wow pls continue affirr with langa

This story is Extremely Erotic...you are a real genius... please please please please please please please please please continue the story after 2nd part also...I have read it 20 times....you are truly awesome... continue Your great work

Perfect plot and an amazing story .Ravi is a lucky husband to have a wife like Malti...i already started picturising my wife to be like Malti... perfect she is