An Intricate Weaving Pt. 01

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I just wasn't sure about Vanessa. I didn't like her. She treated me like a nobody and that hurt. Okay, if my husband had just introduced his new lover to me, and my submissive lover had scored her assets a nine, then perhaps I'd be jealous and snippy too. I decided to cut her some slack. I really wanted her to like me.

"Come on pet. Let's go back inside... and be proud. You're gorgeous and sexy. Just do what Vanessa says and you guys will get on just fine."

Master led me back into the lounge and I stood proudly naked before my antagonist. I was determined to make him proud.

"Charlie, my pet is ready. Bath her and shave her and then come get me. I want to watch you deflower her, but I want to support her. She's scared and frightened." Master stood behind me and held me... and caressed my left breast gently, tweaking my nipple and reigniting that goddamned fuse. A fat tear scrolled down my cheek. This was all too much.

"Oh my pretty one!" Vanessa jumped to her feet and moved in close. "I'm sorry for getting so pissy. You're such a beautiful girl and sometimes I get so damned jealous. Please forgive me for being so bitchy."

I wobbled as my nipple was squeezed between thumb and forefinger. Acting on impulse I leaned forward and gently... and softly... kissed my new Mistress's full sweet lips. She hissed into my mouth. I backed up and recognized the shimmer of tears forming at the corner of her eyes.

"My god you're perfect." She patted my cheek hurriedly, then turned and fled the room.

I glanced at Master. He winked. I glowed with pride and stuck my 'nines' out.

Charlie placed a hand in mine and I trotted along behind the naked Adonis feeling very pleased with myself. I think Mistress actually liked me. That had to be a good thing, right?

****

To be continued.

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irinmikeirinmikeover 2 years ago

Never read your stuff so indulged myself. It stunk and I am glad it was short enough so that I don't have to know what to do the next time I come upon one of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Thanks for the Notice this is a Cuckold Story

Thanks for the up front notice this is another cuckold story. Readers should read the notice before reading your stories. I read your notice and have not read any of your stories.

I do like BTB stories and the only cuckolding is the slut whore is cheating on her man who then kicks her to the curb when he finds out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Over-the-top trash

Regardless of the subject matter, it was badly conceived and poorly written. It lacked any type of originality or cleverness and simply wasn't interesting or entertaining to read. You just plain wrote a bad story. 1 star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

I'm not picking on the author , the story is good but for the life of me I really can't comprehend living that way. She was kid lead into it but how can a guy get trapped in that lifestyle if he don't agree with it. Finding out and meeting them would of been a deal breaker , a chance to walk away. Why put up with your girl or wife fucking other men. If your all doing it I guess with all in agreement but if your the one who's not into that lifestyle than walk away. They never mentioned if hubby was fucking others also or if he is just the dope who serves them and listens fuck while he sits around. Let her go be with them or can he fuck the other two wives while his wife is a used slave when him and Charles want her. Hope it gets more cleared in chapter two

patilliepatillieabout 8 years ago
Hmmm, not as clearly interesting a first chapter

as Triple Treats or What the Hells Happening, but I participate in another chapter.

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