All Comments on 'An Island Affair'

An enchanting tale that is full of detail, but not over-burdened by it. A great deal of erotic writing, including my own, is based on pleasing fantasy; where almost anything is possible and the events tend to stretch far from reality. The thread of this story is charmingly believable and a pleasure to read from beginning to end. I am tempted to read more submissions!

beautiful sensitive tale

What more can I say?

Beautiful story, great job.

I loved it! Funny, charismatic characters. The detail was wonderful. More please.

Because I am and we dinae say soccor we say footbaw, haha

You did so good with the lovely descriptions of the island and the sweet lovemaking.

Thank you.

I really had a great time.

I really loved this story. Not the violence, but the love before and after. Thank you for sharing it with us!

......... story about life on a Scottish island.

OK, as has been mentioned, you used "soccer" but that seems almost essential so that those across the pond can get the reference.

Of all the teams in Scotland you had to pick one half of the Old Firm, ah well, as a Partick Thistle fan even I can`t hold that against you.

A nice, simple and mostly sweet love story.

Thank you

That was a lovely story well written. If it was true I hope the relationship blossomed

This was a fabulous tale with great characters set in a remote part of the world and perhaps not the most accepting of places. Nice work, i look forward to your next one. Thanks

Love the story. As Alex says, I'm also sure the linguistic oddities are deliberate to increase accessibility (for those interested, two more examples: the name of the club is just 'Rangers', no 'Glasgow'; and land/housing sales are not usually referred to as 'real estate' in common speech).

That was a sweet, tentative love story, told in short story format. It could have been stretched to novella length, but I think you did an admirable job in short form. Well done! 5*

Lovely story, great writing!