All Comments on 'An Island Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice start!

Nice start, or at least potentially so. The chapter was too short to really determine much about the characters or about their lives, other than being fuck-buddies. Given that such is hardly much of a basis for a long-term relationship, one can hope that the next chapter will reveal much more.

-- KK in Texas

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