by ElsieThompson
I just finished reading all four of your stories and loved them. The tone was light and the sex was perfect, just the right amount of description. And the characters were delightful. Maggie is my favorite character because she doesn't seem to take things as serious as most people might. She recognizes her needs and does something about it, and thats a wonderful thing. I want to see more of her!
And you've got the writing craft down very well, and that makes the story so much more interesting because, in part, if the poor grammar and spelling get in the way of what could be a good story, it becomes difficult to read and one must concentrate on the work of reading instead of getting into the story. So, great job!
I hope that you are getting ready to put more stories here.
Ted (pooky12349@yahoo.com)
A very beautiful story which I greatly enjoyed reading,
Robertodavo aka Robert Davidson.