All Comments on 'An Itch You Can't Scratch'

I enjoyed that, thank you.

Hah, I loved this one.

Sweet, Fun & Funny with a happy ending....

Well that was hot...hoping for more similar stories or part 2...this site needs more older sister incest...Great Job.

And now that they've got a much larger supply of the witch's elixir, who knows what might happen? Hope this becomes a series.

I love 'comedy of errors' type stories, I love to imagine the expressions on the protagonist's faces when the shit hits the fan, the scurrying around trying to make it better and only causing more problems, but ultimately coming to a great big happy ending.

You made me laugh, and you made a fun story hot and sexy, and I'd like to echo what another commentator said; we definitely need more big sister stories like this. 5 stars.

yes maybe this could be expanded, mothers friends, sister in law, teacher - who knows, it could be an on going series.

This is a really good story I hope you do more like it .Very hot .Gave it a 5.

Utterly unbelievable as most of these incest stories are, but that's what fantasy is all about - being able to suspend disbelief and enjoy. I did and did.

Really enjoyed the story

Cudos to the author , there was no 12 inch dicks or 40 DDD in the story . Just a " Believable " what IF story . And for once the author included a guy who needed help to climax the second time . There are too many stories here that proclaim that a guy can shoot off 5 times in 3 hours .

Cheers

I hope they will both geting pregnant :)

Great story. Where does the witch live? Let's have follow ons.

Hope the next chapter continues

I liked it a lot

I loved it! Straight into the story, no irrelevant biographical or physical details (I guessed it was a male narrator but wasn't absolutely sure for a time). Wonderful flashes of humor. The young characters are well drawn. Great fantasy sex story. Thank you!

so where can i get some of this cream?

Love it! Thank you!

Great story, will you do a follow up

Loved the prank and the unintended results. Could use some editing though. Keep it up.

Reader. Proofreader. Get one.

Great story, wish I had some of that cream for my old dick.

A Mason jar? They are going to kill that poor kid!

I like your idea about a Mason Jar... I've got a gallon size one in the shed, I'll go get it cleaned up!

If those two keep using that cream on him he won't know if he is coming or going. Lucky sod.

Handyman2

This is in my top 5 story's on this site. Please do more like this one !! 5/5

This is by far the best story I've read for a long, long while and richly deserves a 5* rating. My only grouse is that I've searched all the top online stores and no-one seems to selling this cream. Bummer :(

Clever premise and fun to read. It reminds me a little of the movie 'Love Potion #9'. It's just a shame that people think they need a love potion to feel this way.

what happens when dad comes home?does this turn into a family fuckfest then or what? or will they just pair off with mom and dad while the sibs pair up.

Love the part where she says Oops

to have the husband/father walk in due to a cancelled plane flight.

I see real potential for some fun torture with that cream! Like dose someone before they leave and make them suffer until then can get back home.

I liked this and I had a few chuckles here and there also. Great job!

and quite funny too !

Needs a sequel.

Agree need a sequel

We need a sequel !!!

If you haven't heard yet, WE NEED A SEQUEL! (and you need a proofreader. Seriously) Maybe one or both of the girls get's pregnant. You could easily do a series on this. Pros: Short, easy to read, no long backstory or unnecessary details. It had humor, combined with just enough details to know what the characters are seeing and feeling, without taking up half a page talking about what someone looked like (I feel like I'm repeating myself). Cons: You need a proofreader.... Seriously....

When is the next chapter ?

I really wush my family bad been like that.. you are very talented, please continue..

Great story. Thanks.

Very Good imagination you have, Great story.

is a full fledged adolescent fantasy - and well done by the way!

There's something to be said for a silly, simple idea executed well. Honestly, this story should have been stupid and cliche, but somehow it wasn't. Well done.

Looking forward to more!

That was exciting in more ways than one. Makes me want to go find and visit that "witch". Hope you write an encore to this and let us know how the rest of the weekend goes.

Where is the Infomercial selling that?

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

A lot of grammar errors. But story was ok. Thanks!

Ha! Love it! It really helped how the sister treated the brother earlier in the story, followed by how well things went later...

Five for you!

the more I read, the harder my dick gets. i have a new favorite author. I haven't gotten this excited since reading samslam's sleepover. you should check it out!

When you end up becoming your hot mom's and sister's fuck-toy. Woe is me. Anyway, can I get some of that special cream? Please!?

Good story but needs some proofreading - Hate to be the one to point it out but that kid is dumber than a dirt clod -