All Comments on 'An Ode to Lust Ch. 02'

Keep up the good work. You are definitely writing up an almost romance novel. Though, I think your editor might need to be mores strict with the red pen.

Well done.. keep up the good work.

Enjoying the story - but...

Please skip the recap of the last chapter. It's really annoying for those of us that have already read it. Treat this like the chapters in a book. Dickens wrote all his stories for serialization, but never recapped. Neither should you.

She will be loving.

Then Evelyn will teach him.

Kate will be DESSERT.

Can't wait for the next chapter