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by dolscibaby

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PsuedeONhymPsuedeONhymabout 6 years ago
Brilliant. Give it another read

I really like the story line, but recommend another proof read.

Edit suggestion: the goddess discards Penelope, after using her as foreplay, but then asks her politely to eat her cream pie. I find that bit incongruous.

Keep up the good work. Eagerly awaiting more.

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