All Comments on 'An Office Refugee Ch. 03'

Good, except the 'fark' thing was very distracting. No one would put an 'r' sound in that word. I think I know the sound you were trying to describe, but you didn't have to describe it over and over again, even if you did it right. Sorry, but this is a good story, and I'm irritated you did that to it.

Was hoping for more parts to this. Loved it!