All Comments on 'An Orc's Slave Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Good start. Looking Forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Oh what a lovely life that would be!

Can't wait for more!

JasonMcDJasonMcDabout 9 years ago
Great story, real turn on

Really enjoyed this story, I felt the orc's language could have been a bit more orcy but not having seen or heard a shemale orc, I can't take points off for that! I do hope Thomas manages to escape and save his friends but maybe he'll just have to learn to "lump" it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
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Do please continue. Very hot story.

LoveHurtsF95LoveHurtsF95over 2 years ago

This has some of the most thought out worldbuilding I have ever read in an erotic story. Needless to say, I really like how MC went from being a traditional merchant to becoming this powerful orc's "Wife".

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