All Comments on 'An Orc's Slave Ch. 05'

This story would be a lot more enjoyable if the chapters lasted any decent amount of time. I'm sure your characters are physically and emotionally going through enough turmoil to justify quite a bit more detail, even if you did limit them to one day's events per chapter.

Please make more

I don't know why but this is my all time favorite story on this site. Please wright more! I also really hope, that he grows to like it, and chooses to stay with Bologal, as aposed to running away with his friends! Keep up the good work! Wright more, and maybe make the chapters a little longer!

MOAR

Poor Bologal! At least they got to snuggle sweetly at the end. It is a well written story but I do think a bit more at a time would be better. I guess this depends on your free time to write of course.