All Comments on 'An Orgy of Grapes'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A good read

It was well written and good for a quick realese, one thing through, you switched between the names Jason and Justin

Keep up the good work

- Zecjala

SteppaSteppaalmost 10 years agoAuthor

Re-reading it, I realise how drunk I was when I wrote this. I apologise to my audience for all the typos.

KissedManyKissedManyalmost 10 years ago
Loved it.

The explosion in passion was well illustrated. Pass the wine!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

This was sexy as hell, but also kind of sweet and attentive. I really like how June and Sophie got together.

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