by bluechick1976
I've never read anything by you before, but I will keep my eyes out for you in the future because this was one hot story that got me very horny by the middle of the first page, not to mention the rest of it. I'd love to read a second chapter!
Several cuts above most of what one finds on Lit. Nicely done.
I'm definitely interested in a sequel. Although I don't normally get into the incest themes, I got interested in your writing while reading another of your stories (the one about the girl meeting and fucking a stranger in a pool in the woods). Please get out the next installment of this story as soon as possible.
Non-concentual is one thing, incest is another, and like a virgin would get used to both over the course of a single day....
I couldn't stop rubbing my clit to this amazing story!! Please write again, you had a really good background story leading up to the erotic writing, how far is the uncle going to push her? Is she going to fight back more? I can't wait to see how you continue this.
The fat ugly redneck destroyed my enjoyment of it. You should have lft that part out completly or at least made him good looking. I would have beat the fuck out of the fat loser before I let him touch me.