All Comments on 'An Uncommon Massage'

imo this should be in the cheating wives.

with a heavy demand on timing and salesmanship. Very interesting ?

She went from getting the massage to sitting on his face in the blink of an eye. Since you made it clear that she was nervous and unsure about everything you lost me right there. perhaps if he had heard her talking to a friend (on one of his phone taps) about sexual fantasies first then it would have been more believable. what happened next seemed a little much all at once too. the mention of the rape and killing groups was just disturbing.

Some spelling and grammar errors. nothing a proofreader or editor wouldn't fix though.

interesting concept as well. I would have liked to have learned more about what he did, how he did it and for whom.