All Comments on 'An Undeniable Passion Ch. 21'

Very good story, but you can't let V marry Thomas that's not how the story suppose to end!!!! Please continue, I have to find out what happens!

I wonder what Thomas and Doris are up to? Excellent story.

I have loved this story and believe I've had more than my share of fantasies about Drake making love to me the way he did with Virginia on the ship. However, her coolness to him now is getting a bit too much. Of course she needs to end up with Drake. A few very steamy sex scenes would be nice if it goes on much longer. I'd love to hear more about his wonderful body and how he arouses the senses with his incredible lovemaking! She needs to release his need and they need to do more than kiss and nibble on nipples!

agree with the other fans comments, V needs to admit this and we need to find out what is up with Thomas and him be exposed for the butthead he is...i can feel it...there has to be major trouble brewing and i can't wait to see how you work this out...but in your excellent opels fashion so i place and trust this is going to get even more interesting before it is over...geez i would love to have V's problem with Drake...my oh my what i would do with that man...i know wicked wicked wicked, yep thats me. i will be waiting very unpatiently you can be assured at the stroke of midnight this evening to see if there is anything new from this story or anything you may fancy to create...Thank you for your excellent story(s) respectfully your fan in Texas naynay

We all like happy endings and this will have one for sure. Opels I love the passion and fury you write into this story. It is wrenching and I love it. Great chapter. Keep them coming!