All Comments on 'An Unexpected Awakening'

I don't think that this was your first attempt at writing. A very well constructed story

I have read a number of spa stories, but this one is right up there as being a good message story

I'm not generally all that cranked reading stories about lesbian relationships but I feel you've done a wonderful job of capturing the erotic character of this spa session. I especially liked how you presented the relationship between the sisters. Nice work.

Amazing writing, I got so excited reading this. I love the anticipation and final release. Well done!

I love a happy ending!

Loved it, totally loved it!

Sweet and sensuous armpit licking made this story special.

I really loved this one, thank you so much for sharing it with us!

I love it when "ends" are happy. ;-)

ImNIndy now in Corpus Christi.

"Off the chain!", as far as the story, itself, but the real question, to me, at least, is why has it been so long? No sequel, no other stories; yet with such a major talent at writing. Please reconsider.

Nothing but goldiggers. Instead of downsizing (economically) and seeking emotional fulfillment they cheat. I know it's fantasy but it seems that today our society imitates art.

Outstanding tale of lust and total satisfaction. Well done! "More Chapters, PLEASE"!

Beautifully written, it should be followed by many more stories...!