All Comments on 'An Unexpected Love Ch. 02'

Well written, slightly complicated, very enjoyable read, looking forward to chapter 3.

Although I'm a guy, I'm also very romantic so I loved all the little intimate details. As a guy, however, I did miss the detailed depictions of fellatio, Cunnilingus, maybe some anal, etc. You are an excellent writer! You provide just the right amount of detail without being boring. Great job!

Nail and Kate should wait until Nail graduates......

Great story! Please write more!

Good story again. Spoilt by careless sequencing of events and poor English. But with an amount of help you could be a 4.80 writer here. Think about it. Do you want to be a short story writer?

Can only hope for more!!

Dear Author, Nice love story, well written and characters are strong. Will look forward to their future together. Thank you for your effort. jntiques