All Comments on 'An Unexpected Release'

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DestinyReaderDestinyReaderover 7 years ago
good story

Hope there is more to come.

YechesemYechesemover 6 years ago
Too Much Too Fast

I don't think this would really happen this quick between two people who barely knew one another as classmates even if they flirted a couple of times. I do not know how many teenage girls would initiate sex at a bench in a wooded spot that could be seen from his home and others. She must have been super horny to allow him such privileges. Things have changed since I was a kid (I'm 79), but I believe the storyline could be exciting, but it needs more time to develop. This is only my opinion.

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