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More. This could last a few more chapters.....surely

I thought this was a great start to what will be a very good series I also liked the way you went back and forth between the 2 main people, hope there is more to come

Loved it!

...this was so good. I look forward to the next one.

I'm so thankful that you're taking the time to develop these characters. The backstory and present story have really flowed well together. I also really like the assertiveness and strength of both characters and how they play off each other. I am looking forward to more chapters, but hopefully not "too many" where it would drag on and lose its spark.

A good amount of waffle. Well done. Great start.

I'm loving the slow build. You've given us just enough to keep it interesting. Good character development. I also love the way you're taking us back to Callie and Lexie's beginning in flashbacks. Can't wait for the next instalment! I hope we don't have to wait too long. Thanks again.

This is amazing. Lookin forward to the next part. Keep up the amazing work.

Just lovely. Outstanding characters. Outstanding story. Keep up the good work.

More please I need the next part to this. I loved the characters!

Totally loved this chapter and eagerly awaiting the next. Great characters and storyline, a solid five stars!

Wonderful story with great characters. I've always liked a slow buildup to give the reader a chance to get to know the characters. It gives a story greater depth and makes it richer. Thank you so much for sharing this! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Fantastic story definitely 5 stars!!! I'm so excited to read the next chapter....

Loved your story! Definitely 5 stars! Loved how we got to know the characters in the story and the build up of what's to come

Just dropping by to say thank you for all of your positive feedback.

Chapter 2 is uploaded and I'm still not sure if i'm 100% happy with the way the story is panning out but I'm working on chapter 3 despite being hit with the worst case of writers block!

I'm also in the midst of editing a story I've been working on for about 5 months... it's lengthy and a bit wordy in places so it's going to be a long haul.

I will appreciate any feedback or advice any of y'all wanna give!

Thanks again you beautiful people. <3

That was most enjoyable. Did not find it flowery or verbose in the least as you hinted in the introduction. If anything, it went too fast... I'd have loved a longer, more drawn out and torturous reuniting. Keep up the good work. LNC

Lexie was the shittiest character I've ever seen in any story. Not only did she neglected her girlfriend and slept with her ex but she blamed her for it, how can anyone like her is beyond me!

Good read so far; don't have enough of the back story yet to figure out who did what & why or why it simmered/festered in the background for 8 years.

This is really interesting. It actually pulls me to reading it more. There were a few grammar errors but it's negligible anyway. Keep it up! This story is really getting me going.

Where the hell have I been and missed this wonderful story. Thank god for the Lesbian Hall of Fame section, cause I see I will be spending the better part of my day off gladly reading this series. Ta ta. On to chapter 2

Really enjoying the story and looking forward to the background and further developments. Sounds really promising.

I was unable to read all of this chapter; there were so many errors (perhaps two per sentence) that it was too painful to try to read.

It irks me when I read pissy comments about grammar errors on a site for unpaid authors. It's not like you have professional editors to take of silly little mishaps. I read for the story and the passion that created it. This is an excellent beginning. I appreciate the time, effort and talent that created it. Crap, I just want to reach into my computer and slap the morons that make such stupid comments.

Beautiful story. I’m eager to read the rest! It is well written and left me wanting more, which I will promptly read. You did a great job! I agree with YourLink, this is a great story that had my full attention from the start. Anyone complaining about a few minor grammatical errors can give you the funds to pay an editor. 5 stars all the way :)

The person who made these comments doesn’t understand there is a difference in the two English idioms. This is a beautiful story and read. Enjoy it as written and intended.

Story is great but reading it was exhausting. Unpaid authors, site is free, british vs american. Couldn't care less. Part of the story reads like a draft.

Side note: If you enjoy writing it, put a little effort in to show it.

I enjoyed the story. Please keep writing.

I ALWAYS get annoyed when people either don`t have the guts to put their name to a comment, or make silly complaints regarding American English versus REAL English.

Over the years, I have generally (though not always) found the Americans to be very lazy and at times idiotic in their use of the language.

The worst perhaps using the name "football" for a game where the ball is THROWN and not played with the feet.

I may have digressed slightly but you hopefully get the idea.

Further, the comment about Lexie being a "shitty assed character" was wholly uncalled for.

At this point in the story she has NOT slept with her ex.

I`m just glad Han_cg has chosen to ignore such inane ramblings and completed this story, which I have read many times and is a firm favourite of mine (and yes, there IS a "u" in favour and favourite).

football is football and soccer is soccer

Unfortunately what you writing about, the reunion , is a sign of time, no more commitment and betrayal is so easy to hand especially using app platforms ...... But what starts out of betrayal ends with betrayal because it was accepted in the beginning so it will be happen in the new found partnership as well ...... I fell sorry for torie and for a professional get together this scenario sounds like confusion or worst ...... And in the end there is allways two to play the game, but with three in the game one will be hurt ........ This is a theme written or plays about since ancient times , so it is a nice tale and nice characters ....... 5 stars

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It was a few years ago, she had cancer. As sad as it was, it was a blessing in disguise. She isn't suffering anymore. I miss her everyday..." that is my story

Should have a cheating/infidelity tag. I just can't like the Lexie character. Victoria didn't deserve her bullshit.

I really like your story. You tend to have run on sentences but that could be your style, which is fine. Lexie’s character is fine. This isn’t a story abut saints… and if it was it wouldn’t be on this website:)

Well written and engaging, but I hate all of the characters - they are so cruel, shallow, and self-centered it’s almost painful.