All Comments on 'An Unexpected Turn'

Or maybe even romance?

Yeah it should be in "erotic coupling."

Loved the story. Great job. I thought the ending was funny. Though I kind of feel like a big pervert for liking it.

Are you gonna write more? I think Hilary and Aiden should end up together and the sick freak Jenny should have lots of bad shit come her way.

You certainly have a way with words. Good pace to the story. Interesting plot. The whole seduction was totally believable. Sincerely hope you write more along this line.

Not the predictable scenarios and the seduction was superb.

Well positioned for follow-on stories.

Thank you for the effort, and then sharing