All Comments on 'An Unexpected Turn'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Ok but...

wondering if this is why there is so much bad sex out there with impossible stories like this. No way in hell an anal virgin is taking a once again large dick in his ass with just some spit and no stretching and not having immense pain. No way an anal virginity is loving a 45 min first fuck. How is the dad lasting so long in a tight virgin ass and not having sex with the wife? Not seeing where they asked and found out why the mom doesn't want sex. Then again two supposed straight men just commit incest and fuck without any issue or discussion?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Loved the story

Keep Roger and Jake loving each other. And write more about their adventures together. Give them sexual adventures in bed atop each other, rolling around in their mutual love. Loved Roger's sexy hairy chest and muscular body, his big cock that created Jake. Loved Jake drinking in his father's cum shots. Loved Roger's fucking Jake. Loved their kissing! What a great loving relationship between father and son!

Who hasn't wanted to suck off his father, especially if dad is as sexy and in shape as Roger?!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Damn!!!

Will this story culminate with Jake boning his mom Lucy while getting fucked in the ass by his dad Roger in a hawt MMF bi threesome?

I hope that’s the direction this story is headed?

blackknight314blackknight314about 6 years ago
Not really a gay officinado.

Although man man interactions along with a woman or women doesn't turn me off. No way his son's virgin ass took a large cock pounding his ass for 45 minutes or that dad could pound that virgin ass that long without coming. I don't know. If you plan on continuing this story but ... get a bit more real. I charitably gave 4 *.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Too

Unreal! First time I got fucked it hurted like hell. We tried without lube. Couldn't take it. Make it more real, it will be better.

gaynudist50gaynudist50about 5 years ago
Excellent

Awesome, it would be nice if the son & mother switched beds and the son moved permanently into the marriage bed with his dad.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
fantastic

I loved this great writing, I like the way the son ponders it, might have been erotic if he kept checking his Dad out as he thought about it.

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(RETIRED FROM WRITING AS OF MAY 2018) Australian author. Early 30s. Feminist. Not single, so don't hit on me. But please do tell me if you enjoyed my stories, or not - I am open to *constructive* criticism. I try to have realistic characters in my stories - well, as realisti...