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All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Melody Ch. 11'

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FowlRichFowlRichabout 8 years ago
nice

Nice plot twist.

FormerReaderFormerReaderabout 8 years ago
Surprised

Enjoyable chapter. But I had to point out 2 things: first, i'm surprised a Star Wars fan would get Princess Leia's name wrong LOL. Second, the correct spelling is "aisle" for what you walk on, "isle" is a short form of "island".

auguy86auguy86about 8 years agoAuthor
DAMN YOU AUTOCORRECT!

Can't believe I missed Leia's misspelling! Oh well...

soreireisoreireiabout 8 years ago
Oh poo the ex

Maybe Melody can just shot her to the moon. A good place for people who are dense and insensitive.

auguy86auguy86about 8 years agoAuthor
Don't worry soreirei...

Selena isn't the ex. Re-read Ch. 00 again. You'll love the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
This is the last place I expected a spoiler for star wars to be.

No, I haven't seen it yet, I'm waiting until I can see it at home.

rightbankrightbankover 7 years ago
I was wondering

what happened to Selena

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Welcome, readers! My name is M.H. Barton, also known as auguy86. I am an author of erotic literature, dabbling mostly in romance and sci-fi/fantasy. I have lived for my entire life in the southern United States, aka "The South." I live here with my fantastic and loving wife, ...