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Click hereShe rolled out of his sleeping arms, and hated the way her body was reluctant to leave him, even now. She gathered her clothes, and left his room, closing the door quietly behind her. Now alone, naked and holding her clothes against her, in this cold quiet hallway, she felt even worse.
She slowly felt the pain completely engulf her, and couldn't stop herself from breaking down. Even though she was the one who left Garret, she felt deserted and betrayed. How could he have done this to her? There was nothing for them but a sordid, painful affair that would no doubt end in tragedy. He was her brother, and no matter how much she wished that it were different, the facts would never change.
She realized that silent tears were falling down her face, and she lay huddled in the hallway. She crawled over to the bathroom, shutting and locking the door, and as soon as she did, she broke down into sobs, unable to think or move, just feeling her body shaking, and her tears flowing down her cheeks.
Garret woke up instinctively reaching for Dorothy, even before his mind was awake enough to remember what had happened last night, only to find that she wasn't there. He sat up in bed and looked about the room, there was no sign of her, nothing to indicate that what had happened last night had been anything more than a dream.
Then he heard something so soft he wondered if he had imagined it. He opened his door, and heard it a bit louder coming from the bathroom. It was Dorothy. He couldn't mistake her heart-wrenching sobs for anything other than what they were, and he could feel his own heart break in his chest. He walked over to the door, but made no attempt to enter it, instead just kneeling down outside it, wanting to be that much closer to her.
Listening to her weeping, he knew that she couldn't feel anything but regret for what happened last night. She had left his room to get away from him, and was now spilling her bitterness alone in the bathroom. He felt a grief like no other picturing her curled on the cold bathroom floor, knowing that he was the one who drove her there, and wanting nothing more than to have her in his arms right now.
He wanted to hold her, absorb her tears, calm her pain, but he knew that that was the last thing she wanted. So he just sat in his own personal hell outside the door, listening to her pitiful sobs, until she finally quieted. He heard her turn on the shower, and strangely missed her cries that so tore at his heart, because at least then he felt connected to her, and without that connection, he was just alone in the hallway, abandoned.
He sat there for a long time, until he heard the shower go off and knew he had to leave so she wouldn't discover him there. He went back to his room, and sat on the bed, the bed where they had made love, and he didn't leave, and she didn't come to him.
- COMMENTS
RodimusMikeover 1 year agoThis story needs resolution with a second chapter.Garrett so coldly and mercilessly took Dots virginity without thought of Dots feelings.Sure he did it out of love,but honestly in a way I think Dot should tell their Parents what Garrett did and face justice.
Also Dot deserves her retribution towards him,and get her pound of flesh as they say.What Dot did by going out and getting drunk was pointless but for an 18 year old that is typical and forgiveable,but rape of your sister is just heinous and inexcuseable.
Do I think Dot and Garrett should ever reconcile,the answer to that is HELL NO,he kept her hidden from boys who wanted to pop her cherry,but for Garrett was he any different than those guys,guess what he's not,and should take a long look in the mirror to think he is any better than those horny fucking assholes who just wanted Dot for sex.
GoesGruntover 9 years agoI'm not sure if it's a side effect of posting to Literotica or not, but it seems like a lot of authors treat their eighteen year old characters more like they're fifteen.
Adults don't typically have curfews, and while I'm sure plenty of eighteen year olds still attending high school hear "while you're living under my roof you'll live by my rules" it's still just silly to portray them so consistently as if they were still treated as children.
I frequently wonder if the author isn't trying to tell a 'realistic' teen story and calling the characters adults due to posting rules.
Anonymousover 9 years agoBig brother Garret not only loves is baby sister Dot, he's in love with her. He wants the best for her, no pimply-faced punk only interested in getting his rocks off is going to get close to Dot. Garret knows that his darling sister is a virgin and that it's a big brother's job to bust his kid sister's cherry anyway. The first cock up her pink, innocent, adorable little coochie should be her own brother's stiff young cock, and the first load of creamy semen splattered all over the inside her sweet slit should come from his brotherly balls. Dot loves her brother as her protector, and when he touches her she tingles. As Garret fucks his love into Dot, she's ecstatic, has a woman's real cum for the first time. This is beautiful, a brother and sister doing what siblings have done from time immemorial and what lots and lots of them are doing everywhere nowadays. The next day, remorse sets in, and Dot leaves. I hope this isn't the end. It can't be that Dot's mind is permanently infected by the stupid outmoded social "taboo" on the carnal fun a brother and sister can have together. It's Garret's big hard cock, no other boy's, that belongs up his baby sister's warm wet twat, and the sooner Dot realizes the fact the better.
Rockyroads50almost 14 years agoOr are you going to let us assume that their sibling relationship was irrevocably damaged? It would be interesting to see where you'd want to take this story line.
