All Comments on 'An Unlikely Affair'

And a nice twist ending.

"Well-written and conciseful," as they used to say in certain institutions of lower learning where one is trained to exploit the criminal injustice system for personal gain. Ahem. (Lawyer jokes are really in poor taste.)

At least I think they used to say that. They never said it to me personally, of course. Said a lot of other things though.

Sorry. I may be slightly inebriated but I mean what I say.

So, anyway, thanks. And the ending was really quite amusing and made this a "5" for sure.

No wonder I couldn't find "conciseful" in the dictionary. It's either concise or it's not. One can not be full of consicion. Unlike circumcision.

Kindly accept my apologies

Very well written, both humorous and erotic. Scarlett sounds like my ideal woman. More please.

Well written without wasting time on some useless details like in other stories. Would love a continuation to this snd probably some added detail still, not pointless but details that help character development and such. Either way well written, 5/5.

Brilliant, concise writing. 5 stars.