All Comments on 'An Unlikely Couple'

The characters, the story, the writing, all just awesome! This story could use to have more chapters added. It has great potential to be a great ongoing series for a bit. Loved it!!!!

Well done and a need for a couple follow up sessions.

Maybe she will ever enjoy football.

As this is only your second story under this avatar,sorry can't believe you've never submitted to an erotic story site before.Gramatically excellent,plot/storyline excellent,erotic content the same.only gave 75% as i hope the next chapter will be just as good,so got to give some leeway for the max 100.Keep up the good work.

andyd46 uk

normally I don't care for str8 stories this one was well written and you could actually feel a bit of the angst once the story got rolling

interesting, the macho jock needed to be shown the way by the "not-in" crowd

that did catch my attention

After reading this I can't help but want to read more. I see that this was posted in 2009 but I really do hope for more

Did not care for the other story by theunknown2000 Watching My Husband, for reasons I explain in my comment there. But I gave this one 5 stars. It could have gone longer to show where their relationship went (including more sex lessons), but for a short story, it was quite good.

Paul in Oklahoma