All Comments on 'An Unlikely Encounter'

I was ecstatic to see a new story of yours! You are my favorite writer, please keep writing!!!!!!!

Quite erotic. Captured a lot of different moods ..

Where has this group of idiot writers come from? How absolutely stupid and rotten to begin nearly every paragraph with "-" get an editor and redo this, it should be removed until a decent version is presented for posting.

As usual a lovely story.

You set the tone well and you developed the characters well. Nicely done!

Many novelists for well over a century have used embedded dialogue, a form of which I choose to employ.

Read Flaubert's 'Madame Bovary'. Or anything modern by prize-winning authors ranging from Cormac McCarthy (USA) to James Kelman (Scotland).

This is LITetotica. Not 'porn for the illiterate.'

Your style and tone were delightful. Reading as they danced together in their political and sexual/sensual dance was a joy. Then to read the comments left by strange members of the club called anon was another treat. Part of my joy in both reading and writing is in playing with the language, style, grammar and inventing new words. It is always fun to see someone else play, too.

Thank you.

I really like your style, Scotsman, especially in this latest story. The characters are nicely developed for the length of story, so we can empathise with their respective beliefs and actions. I especially enjoyed the fact that a male can write about the uneasiness of feeling, as women so often do, powerless, in the battle of the sexes… Well Done, and beautifully expressed.

that this is now my favorite of your stories. It's fresh. Real. And I definitely enjoyed the balance of power in their encounter. Knowing you, that had to be quite an interesting experience. Thanks for a very enjoyable read.

Loved this story. As usual, Scotsman, you manage to draw the reader in with your ever enticing give and take, be it in the name of feminism or dominance. Loved the glimpses of his vulnerability in this one, though - a different side of you, to be sure, but all enjoyable. Thanks for a great story ... can't wait for more from you.

This is most likely my most favourite story - it gets me all the time, evey time! It makes my pussy so wet, and my nipples so hard! It makes me yearn to cummm! GOD Almighty You are a Master extraordinare!!!!!! This story is so hot it burns and i LOVE your description of how she feels: so aroused, so accommodating, and always so eager to please him.

The balance of power was interesting, and different from some of your other stories. The Scottish language is such a beautiful thing...makes me think of mist covered hills in the early morning. Hehehe, now I see where part of your bio came from :) Still workng my way through your stories, and every one is a treat.

You do not disappoint. I loved the way you seduced us, along with allowing us to watch their seduction. Color, timing, descriptions, emotion - it was all wonderful

I like the genuine depiction of two mature characters. It is right that you don't describe either Sandy or Samantha much, leaving it to our imaginations. I feel it would be stronger if you have a more explicit political conflict at the top, maybe a thorny labor dispute, maybe something that symbolizes and presages their characters. Nice work.

A treat indeed. This is my first read of your volumes, but will not be my last.You have me thrumming and sopping wet with your delicious descriptions, and thrilled to read such eloquent prose. Masterful.

Very sexy. I don't know if sexlating and cuntneed are Scottish words, but I liked them!

I like your style of writing, and also there is good character development. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work…

Cuntneed is an amazing word and has an almost antiquated feel about it, I think -- I love it!

Your individualistic writing style is very engaging, I haven't visited Literotica for ages as a large percentage of other writers here just seem to bang them out (ha), but you're a skilled writer. Loved "Girl at the peace camp". Will definitely be reading more.

Liz

Not just deeply erotic but well written, authentic in dialogue and setting, characterisation and so much more.

Thank you.

Zach.