All Comments on 'An Unplanned Lesson'

That was a really good story. It's strange though. It feels like it's missing something.

"Her body started to clinch and release repeatedly as her juices made his cock slip faster inside her."

A sentence like that should've really affected me. But it didn't. Maybe your story should've been longer. More of a seduction. I think it was more of a lack of feeling. The details describing what was happening was fine, but we need to know more about how they were feeling.

Also I'd prefer a bit more pain mixed with pleasure, but thats more about preference than anything else.

Really good job for your first story though.